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Het Vid White Wedding by FallOutWoman Het Vid White Wedding by FallOutWoman
I love the really old videos, ya know the ones from Mtv's very first days before videos became formated and they all started to look alike. The reason why I like them so much is because they look like dreams. Ivan and Natalia in a scene from the video for White Wedding. The lyrics are appropriately; Hey little sister what have you done. Hey little sister who's the only one. Hey little sister who's your superman. Hey little sister who's the one you want. Hey little sister, shot gun. It's a nice day to start again. It's a nice day for a white wedding. It's a nice day to start again.[link]
Godz, shirtless Ivan. Actually, in the video Billy Idol looks like Ivan Drago from the Rocky movies. The ring is made out of barb wire and I am so loveing the blood.
Okay, I'm just going to be fair, and say it can be improved. The overall topic of Hetalia is slightly overused, but the topic of a "White Wedding" Is something I definatly have not seen before.

Next, Anatomy. Why does the girl have absolutly NO expression. I'd be screaming my arse off if that were me! Though, I do like the expression of the male. It shows he is angry, enraged. The hair could be worked on, and remember women don't have as broad shoulders as men do. The scarf shouldn't look like it's choking him, so you should do something to indicate it being loose.

Shading. What did you use for this? MS Paint. Or dA Muro? Either way, it's hard to shade on both of those, so I sugest just coloring in a few spots a slightly darker color than the base color to make it look darker.

So, yeah. That's about as mych as I can really say except for keep practicing. Hope this is fair...
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Belarus-Hetalia Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
FallOutWoman Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Belarus-Hetalia Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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April 6, 2012
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